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Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
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Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
(Nick97 comes to the ring and grabs a mic)
Nick97:almost everyone who signed up for the hardcore tournament thinks they could win. they are wrong Nick97 or Collective Soul two members of Prime Time will win.Then we will beat and destroy the The Extremists.
Crowd:loud chats for you suck
Nick97:That is it the you suck chants will stop tonight.
(Nick97 gets out of the ring grabs a fan and throws him in the ring)
Nick97:This will be a example.
(Nick97 waits for the fan to get up)
(Rhino comes out and runs to the ring)
Nick97:almost everyone who signed up for the hardcore tournament thinks they could win. they are wrong Nick97 or Collective Soul two members of Prime Time will win.Then we will beat and destroy the The Extremists.
Crowd:loud chats for you suck
Nick97:That is it the you suck chants will stop tonight.
(Nick97 gets out of the ring grabs a fan and throws him in the ring)
Nick97:This will be a example.
(Nick97 waits for the fan to get up)
(Rhino comes out and runs to the ring)
Nick97- Number of posts : 57
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THE GORE
Nick is about to 97 kick the fan and then Rhino turns him around and Gores him through the barricade then Rhino helps the fan up and they go to the back to see if hes hurt and then the camera fades out
Last edited by Rhino on Sat May 09, 2009 11:48 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
Sergiy Cena music comes out Fans to cheer As he begins runing towards the ramp but stops near the ring. As he get under the the ring to get a table as he than begins to set it up his left hand and shoulder hurting. After what they did to him as he than takes him and brings nick to where the Table is as he than puts his head towards the middle of the his setion as He than puts his hands towards his emenys bully and lefts him with all the might he can has due to his left hand...And slams him down throw the table. As he did a Davsitling SERGIY BOMB.. He than asks for a mic As he than takes it and than bring himself low towards his face and says.
Sergiy Cena: Had enough talking didn't you... You and Zafir and CS assuted me Today and my match agisnghts rhihno still hardn't come im injoyed but for god.. When i win and come out the New Lightheavry hardcore champ that that you and your prime time will have HELL TO PAY.... And i can't be anyone i mean the Exaislitst can be anyone think aginin we just just took down one of the members of prime eevn thourth i cound't have taken you out my self which i did for the most part. Good bye oh and yeah forgot one thing YOU WANT SOME COME AND GET SOME! And good bye and good luck your gonn need it." Sergiy Cena Music goes on and he begin to walk towards the entacte ramp.
Sergiy Cena: Had enough talking didn't you... You and Zafir and CS assuted me Today and my match agisnghts rhihno still hardn't come im injoyed but for god.. When i win and come out the New Lightheavry hardcore champ that that you and your prime time will have HELL TO PAY.... And i can't be anyone i mean the Exaislitst can be anyone think aginin we just just took down one of the members of prime eevn thourth i cound't have taken you out my self which i did for the most part. Good bye oh and yeah forgot one thing YOU WANT SOME COME AND GET SOME! And good bye and good luck your gonn need it." Sergiy Cena Music goes on and he begin to walk towards the entacte ramp.
Sergiy Cena- Number of posts : 93
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Re: Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
ok guys, listen up. i am going to help you to become better story writers.
first off... descriptions! dont just be like *john comes running down to the ring and attacks joe*
describe it. does your entrance appear on the titantron? do you come down the ramp? or perhaps out from the crowd? does the crowd Boo or cheer you? as you watch wrestling pay attention to peoples intros, and then use your imagination and come up with your own.
when you get to the ring, if somebody is in there, do you just slide right into the ring? perhaps you hop onto the ring apron and jump over the top rope? perhaps you walk around the ring first to check out your opponent. be descriptive.
finally you make it into the ring. do you attack them? if so... how? is their back turned towards you? are they facing you? How do you attack them?
that make sense? be as descriptive as you can, that way other people can imagine exactly what you want them to imagine.
come ready to RP for a reason. what is the reason your wrestler would come down to the ring? is something happening in the ring? if so add that to your own RP. and continue it so everyone is telling the story.. but make it flow as ONE single story. not many stories binded together.
finally after you have done this.. try going back over what you have wrote... please... READ it. read what it is so as to correct typos and spelling errors. take your time with it, enjoy it, and you will have created a damn good story.
first off... descriptions! dont just be like *john comes running down to the ring and attacks joe*
describe it. does your entrance appear on the titantron? do you come down the ramp? or perhaps out from the crowd? does the crowd Boo or cheer you? as you watch wrestling pay attention to peoples intros, and then use your imagination and come up with your own.
when you get to the ring, if somebody is in there, do you just slide right into the ring? perhaps you hop onto the ring apron and jump over the top rope? perhaps you walk around the ring first to check out your opponent. be descriptive.
finally you make it into the ring. do you attack them? if so... how? is their back turned towards you? are they facing you? How do you attack them?
that make sense? be as descriptive as you can, that way other people can imagine exactly what you want them to imagine.
come ready to RP for a reason. what is the reason your wrestler would come down to the ring? is something happening in the ring? if so add that to your own RP. and continue it so everyone is telling the story.. but make it flow as ONE single story. not many stories binded together.
finally after you have done this.. try going back over what you have wrote... please... READ it. read what it is so as to correct typos and spelling errors. take your time with it, enjoy it, and you will have created a damn good story.
Zafir- Number of posts : 26
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Re: Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
yes , youll be better for it
Collective Soul- Number of posts : 40
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Re: Nick97s Hardcore annoncement
Thanks for the help.
Sergiy Cena- Number of posts : 93
Age : 30
Points : 5692
Reputation : 0
Registration date : 2009-02-15
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